http://snakeinthebasement.wordpress.com/2008/09/15/150/ Thu, 03 Dec 2009 07:26:15 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 http://snakeinthebasement.wordpress.com/2008/09/15/150/#comment-335 Rethabile Tue, 27 Oct 2009 05:33:23 +0000 http://snakeinthebasement.wordpress.com/?p=150#comment-335 Interesting momentum. I'd kill the "dirty" in line two. I think the line would be fresher without it. Thanks for the read. Interesting momentum. I’d kill the “dirty” in line two. I think the line would be fresher without it. Thanks for the read.

]]> http://snakeinthebasement.wordpress.com/2008/09/15/150/#comment-277 S.L. Corsua Mon, 29 Sep 2008 21:17:56 +0000 http://snakeinthebasement.wordpress.com/?p=150#comment-277 He will learn, he will learn, as we have, the magic of deep breaths and counting one to ten. ;) He will learn, he will learn, as we have, the magic of deep breaths and counting one to ten.

]]> http://snakeinthebasement.wordpress.com/2008/09/15/150/#comment-271 Clare Fri, 19 Sep 2008 23:40:16 +0000 http://snakeinthebasement.wordpress.com/?p=150#comment-271 This poem has great momentum! Good read. This poem has great momentum! Good read.

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