Saturday, January 26, 2008

Searching for Service

in a dead zone
the cell phone kills
the call
the connection hangs
mid-sentence
just when I was going
to tell you what train
I’m coming home on
and you still
don’t know

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2 Responses to “”

  1. heartsdrawn said

    I loved this. I felt like I sensed a sort of intensity, like how you feel the split second when the call drops.

  2. heartsdrawn said

    I loved this. I felt like I sensed a sort of intensity, like how you feel the split second when the call drops.

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