Wednesday, March 5, 2008


a lull in the day’s winds
between the morning shock
of lightening
the shudder of thunder
and later the blow
between high pressure and low
this pause and silence
the clouds in repose
a comma in the sentence
of weather


4 Responses to “”

  1. Pam said

    I love the phrase, “comma in the sentence of weather”. Very nice.

  2. noahthegreat said

    “I’m going into the eye of the storm–
    and, I’m still gonna love you even more.”– Blindside

    It was wonderful. I absolutely love weather.

  3. poem works well without punctuation. well spun.

  4. Soulless said

    The metaphor at the end — witty, quotable. I’ll definitely remember you for it, for this impressive, compact piece. Cheers.

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